For the Best I Ever Had

You are beautiful
your love, phenomenal
We spun our dreams
in the promises, eternal

You complete me
like no one ever do
Though so much tears were shed
our love had always went through

Your smiles light me up
being with you, divine
I just cannot express enough
how blessed, this heart of mine

But so suddenly you went away
with reasons, you said best for us two
Great sorrow is within me
It aches so bad, without you

When you left me, you took my happiness and a great part of me.

I will always love you, Bu....


Rock Chef said...

Some say it is better to have loved and lost...

...which is utter bollocks, to be honest!

That is a lovely poem. Hope you find someone soon, despite you evil exterior I think you are a really nice guy.

TechnoBabe said...

Parting is NOT sweet sorrow, is it? You know that you will eventually have to let go in order to move on? Memories are good. Making sure you are happy and healthy is more important. I know there is a better relationship for you.

Aizan Suhaira said...

ololololololo.... comelnya.

Eveline said...

I dont think there is much to be said, I think everyone who has commented has said it all so well... Saying goodbye to someone you love is cruel.

Casey Freeland said...

Powerful. I loved the way it ended.


Shadowthorne @ Ramzu Zahini said...

Rock Chef; The ways we must deceive others.... ok ok, if you say I'm nice, I might be nice :)

Shadowthorne @ Ramzu Zahini said...

TechnoBabe; Am experiencing a new relationship :) Thanks for the kind thoughts.

Shadowthorne @ Ramzu Zahini said...

Aizan; Aku memang comel apa?

Shadowthorne @ Ramzu Zahini said...

Eveline; Saying goodbye is indeed tough, when you know the person is already part of your life.

Shadowthorne @ Ramzu Zahini said...

Casey; :) I always thought that it was forever.

Tenchi said...

comel=mambang ultra?? :brow

Shadowthorne @ Ramzu Zahini said...

Tenchi; Hoi, aku comel apa?!!

fairul faizal ali said...

if i were you, i'd delete this post. It's time to move on.. It was beautifully beautiful.. But trust me, it's just gonna hurt someone else..

--just an opinion--

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